Cruel branches grabbing,
holding me back.
Bitter, piercing cold
burning my chest.
But still I run . . .
I must, I need to!
The snow captures my footsteps,
evidence of my journey.
Finally, I stop at a clearing
while my heart runs on.
There. There she is.
Timeless for all the world.
I stand before her
waiting, searching.
The snow gently falls,
one flake at a time.
Just me and her
and the snow.
A snowflake on her cheek,
a tear on mine.
A tolling bell
breaks the silence,
and gathering from her warmth
I turn to go.
Before me stand my footsteps. . .
like a lesson.
Boldly I step aside,
creating a new pattern in the snow.
9 comments:
WOW!! Very visual and what instruction given in the art of learning. Thank you!!! Cathy
Very good. I love it.
Beautiful...evocative. You should submit this one
Please let me know where this will be published, I want to buy a copy and then write a letter to the editor praising it!!
Okay...you ARE really good at the poetry thing...
excellent.
Love this poem...truly beautiful!
Have a blessed and wonderful day!
smiles, kari & kijsa
Love this poem...truly beautiful!
Have a blessed and wonderful day!
smiles, kari & kijsa
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful! Perfect.
My goodness! Did you write this!
It's exquisette.
Really,
so beautiful!
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